This was pretty fun, and I enjoyed the Resident Evil "master of unlocking" reference! There are two main improvements I'd suggest:
1) Be careful of infodumping- have you ever played the first Deus Ex game? If not, play it now! It's a prime example of a plot that unravels naturally through the player's interactions with other characters, news bulletins etc. that we should all aspire to.
2) Pick a less common font than Arial. Just taking a few minutes to choose a font that reflects the tone of your game will instantly make it 41.3% better (estimated figures!)